sheep
You
are a
small lovely sheep
with short white fur.
Your
gentle figure
turns me on
without any rational explanations.
That's you!
When you are thirsty, you drink beside the lake;
When you are hungry, you eat the green grass;
When you are tired, you squat down the grass;
When you are sad, you shake your round head;
When you are happy, you fly in the air.
Any word is useless to describe your speed,
but you can never run out of this grassland,
because this grassland is my mind.
Tuesday, May 11, 2010
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Frankly, I cannot judge it is good work or not~~~ But from my perspective, poeming is not the exclusive potent of poets. With strong emotional motives, anyone can write masterpieces. I really appreciate your creation!
ReplyDeletehehe, I guess your meaning is about love. A boy concentrates all his attention on a girl called sheep. All the girl's activities are captured by the boy. Slient and patient, the boy are waiting for the girl? Right, man?
ReplyDeleteIs this a translated one or original edition? Whatever, it is a wonderful one and the sheep in it must have a special symbolic meaning.-----Tian Hua.
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