One reason for starting a war is greediness. Most of the wars are out of it. Greediness is one of the inherent personalities of human beings. In ancient times, people fought with the natural or other tribes for food or land to survive. However, in the modern times when living is not a difficult problem anymore, wars still exist. The reason is that people want more profits from others and kinds of temptations drive people to fight. As time goes on, living standard will be improved by the high technology. However, temptation will also accompany the development and cannot be eliminated.
Another reason is the feeling of fulfillment the war brings. If one person fights with another and wins finally, he will be quite happy definitely. In fact, almost everyone enjoys proving himself and wants others to listen to him. In World War II, German and Japanese started global war because they wanted to rule the world. Through the war, they tried to force weak countries to compromise to them and gain a feeling that they were the strongest race in the world.
Wars are not always started by the strong. Even the weak may start the war. Everyone has the sense of self-protect. If this sense is hurt by others, people will fight for it regardless of the fact that they may fail finally. In the movie
In conclusion, wars take place because of human being’ greediness, the pursuit of the feeling of fulfillment gained from the war and the sense of self-protect. However, how to prevent the war from erupting again? The solution hasn’t been found yet since all the reasons are involved with human beings’ natural instincts. Maybe there is no solution at all. What is your opinion?
a good essay! logical and convincing! if i were the tutor, i would give you a 70+.
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you draw conclusion by analysing different situations from ancient tribe wars to modern world wars and find out the three reasons, which i totally agree. structure marks:25(30)
however the essay is lack of specific examples.
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well done! your essay flows smoothly, and you have done a good job in using the new words!
language marks:30(40)
total: 75
Yeah, so many factors contribute to the wars as you conclude. Moreover, what warries me most is that with the advanced science and technology applying in the war, once the war starts, people can hardly survive. How can we protect ourselves then?
ReplyDeleteyour blog really serves me many information about war. I really lack of the knowledge of war ~
ReplyDeleteActually, i do not like things related to war. I think it is crucial and againt many beautiful things. We can solve problems in a more peaceful way, however, people win from the war should not be the proud of us.
the quarrels between people in fact belong to a tiny war. yes, wars are triggered by the possessive. it claims all the beauty of humanity. i hate wars, only those evil leaders are addicted to drive the poor soldiers to fight for their sakes.
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